Need a few of you gear heads to be critical of my idea

I have an idea for a t-shirt I'm thinking about submitting to blipshift.com but before I do, I'd like some feedback. I don't want to post it on the site because I don't want someone else to surf through here and take my design and use it to make millions and get babes and stuff like that.
So, anyone that's willing to spend 15 seconds looking at a graphic and critique it, I'd appreciate it. If you're willing, drop me a PM and I'll send you a jpg. When I have all the info I need, or when the weight of the harsh criticisms make me turn to the bottle for comfort, I'll post here to let you know that I'm all set.

Thanks in advance.

I'm in.

Shoot it over, I'm game.

What the heck... I'm always hoping they'll do more shirts I like.

If you need another eye on it, I am happy to assist.

Send it to me for brutal but honest criticism

Hit Me! or, wait for my criticism, then hit me!

I replied to everyone that IMd me. I can't send an attachment through the GRM IM process, but I can when I reply to an IM sent to me.

You've got my e-mail, send it on over.

Gearheadotaku wrote: You've got my e-mail, send it on over.

Crap! Not seeing it. Can you shoot me a PM?

always happy to help

PM sent!

Well, I tried to reply by email and it won't go through.

I like it. Don't change the shirt. Do it.

I will always defer to the lord UTEerus, but am willing to give a slanted viewpoint

aussiesmg wrote: I will always defer to the lord UTEerus, but am willing to give a slanted viewpoint

I love how you work UTEs into everything! Cracks me up every time.

RE all: Thanks a ton for the feedback. I got lots of good feedback and I now have my marching orders. I don't need to bother anybody else with my silly little ideas. Now I just gotta figure out if I want to have my brother-in-law print some for me, then I gotta sell 'em, or just go through blipshift.
I'm not doing it to get rich, just thought it's be cool.

DrBoost wrote:

aussiesmg wrote: I will always defer to the lord UTEerus, but am willing to give a slanted viewpoint

I love how you work UTEs into everything! Cracks me up every time. RE all: Thanks a ton for the feedback. I got lots of good feedback and I now have my marching orders. I don't need to bother anybody else with my silly little ideas. Now I just gotta figure out if I want to have my brother-in-law print some for me, then I gotta sell 'em, or just go through blipshift. I'm not doing it to get rich, just thought it's be cool.

What, wait, who me, nahh I wouldn't do that

Meow

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^^looks like an old business coup backed way to close to the trailer he was towing. They became one.
Beautiful.....up till the c-pillars.

BTW aussie, if I ever DO get a Rampage, I'll never tell you. I would never live it down.

In reply to DrBoost:

Not to bag on a GRM advertiser, but I hate the BlipShift model. Artificially creating a market by limiting when you can buy a design is stupid. Just make the shirt like normal. If it's good, it will sell, and well beyond one week.

Javelin wrote: In reply to DrBoost: Not to bag on a GRM advertiser, but I *hate* the BlipShift model. Artificially creating a market by limiting when you can buy a design is stupid. Just make the shirt like normal. If it's good, it will sell, and well beyond one week.

Yeah, it's odd. Usually when it's a limited number, it's something special. There have been some designs offered again.
I'm still not sure if I want to have some printed and try to sell them myself, or go through blipshift. If I sell them myself, obvious places like ls1 forums, f-body forums, here, etc. would be a target market. But then I'd have to target that market. This isn't a job, it's just be having a bit of fun.

In reply to DrBoost:

If you post it, it will spread.

Well, I just called my brother-in-law. I'm going to have him print them. When I do this, everyone that offered advice (or a few tried, but the IM didn't go through) I'll give you a shirt at cost. I know, it's not as cool as a "Get Off My Patio Free" card from Margie, but it's as close as I can come.

I am still waiting

^^Don't have a IM from you.

Just sent the email back, I love it as-is!